reeb76
Member Since October 19, 2009
Caught in the Rain Part 2
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KinK
5019 days ago
reeb76
5491 days ago
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9
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Very hot, both parts! Looking forward to the next. Thanks.
Bathing Memories
ONE BIG PARAGRAPH!
The Start of a Beautiful Friendship
That was definitely one of the better stories to hit this site. Thanks and write more. Reeb
Cumming to A Realization...
I found your story very arousing. Good job so please write more. The only thing you missed was giving your readers a description of the charactors. You described the brother some but very little of the sister. Thanks and write more stories.
Beautiful 2
I'm ready for part 3. Thanks.
Closet Case
Excellent story but the ending could have been better. Try to make your paragraphs smaller which will make your story easier to read. Great effort though and please keep writing more. Thanks!
Making Love to My Mother
Not too bad a story. Some positive comments are you need a little more dialog and yes, your ending seemed a bit rushed. Keep trying. Thanks.
Family Photos
Great to see a story where the author put some effort into it.
Looking forward to hearing about the sister's CD. Thanks.
Looking forward to hearing about the sister's CD. Thanks.
Sister's Sexy Workout
This is to "No Way" and "Jane Doe". Sorry this story did not meet your approval but it's better than most stories on this website lately. I challenge each of you to write a better story before you inflict your "negative criticism" toward someone who at le
Sister's Sexy Workout
Constructive positive comments used to be common on this website until the format changed. By the way, this is a "fictional" story.