jollyman
Member Since October 19, 2009
Finally 3
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WMSpearshaker
4848 days ago
jollyman
5321 days ago
WMSpearshaker
4848 days ago
jollyman
5321 days ago
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10
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I wish you would have contenued with a forth part about other goings on that day
My very close sister and me...
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bajayjay13
bajayjay13
start like to know where they go from here does mom and get involed do they fall in love there are alot question on which way thsi will go
A Fresh Start For Brother And Sister - Part 3
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staybee9
staybee9
I gave this five stars because it was that good the build up to thsi part was one of the best I have read on thsi site if thereis more to this story I hope to see it soon.
My Little Sister and Me
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scoutmaster1
scoutmaster1
I think this story is very good in telling now kid really feel about sex at that age for thier first time
Oh Sam Chapter 2
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all@cat
all@cat
Great job you are very good writer looking forword to the next chapter and when mat and sam met up agian
All I wanted to do was fuck the shit out of her...
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storieteller
storieteller
I read the fisrt few k line and stoped if the reat of the stroy is that bad im glad i stoped learn to respect people
The wonderful divorce
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Hotthoughts
Hotthoughts
good start but you might change the text color the red is harder to read but the story ids good and j hope see more very soon
A Sick Day Home From School With Mom
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watchcat
watchcat
tihs is good start but you should wnet a bit afrther in this story but keep up the good work
Me & Kelsey
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parklen86
parklen86
lol you call thsi a story I know now why you go by unknow name i woul;d be embrassed to to I worte something this bad
Me and My Cousin
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trey vs world
trey vs world
Man what place to leave off please bring out part two asap! the is was very good!
Kelly's Fashion Tease
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kelly13
kelly13
I can only give four stars it is a good story but there was alot of speeling errors the next time proof read the story more you post it and if can and have the porgram use MS word it helps a lot
The Ultimate Day
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SSPAdmins
SSPAdmins
it was a good story but you need to spell check the next story you do i make the same mistakes so if use a good program like microsoft woerd and spell check as you it will be much better
Natural Fantasies -- Chapter One!
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Maty007
Maty007
it has the making of great story or gruop of stories please keep it going
My sweet little Tanya part 2
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daggdon0
daggdon0
please add more stroies like both but i think this one was better then the first one
Midnight Mass
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Peter_Pan
Peter_Pan
very good story ad no offence taken on my part even though I am beleaver in christ our lord the did have anything to with religian so I have no problem with it.keep up the good work
Tracy gets her brother 2
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babyoil1975
babyoil1975
good story where is the first a part and and wis it under story title please find it and see if you psot it here becuase i like the ages of the two in the story and how this all got started
“I need your help. Can I Come Over?â€Â
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jack_of_blades
jack_of_blades
very good looking forword to part 2
Leslie My Daughter
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Opiated_Mass
Opiated_Mass
you need more deltail but the story is ok i would rewrite this one and repost with detail and do tell if this a true story or not it has a good start but it does need more detail and background
As Daddy Kissed Me Good Night...
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tlynn
tlynn
good start tell us little more about the girl her age for one thing and do they go farther ?
Old friends
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usmc93
usmc93
thats a good start but because you did not finish it I can only give you four stars I hope you fisnish it and repost or add to it soon.
The stormy night - PART TWO
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wildmanchuck
wildmanchuck
very good story well written better then other i have read on this site looking forward to the next part
Angel Alice
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red87
red87
very good story for a young writer if yoy have any more parts to this stroy please sare them with us
My life with uncle-part 6
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sarahandmark
sarahandmark
agian you captured the inocents of a young learning about sex you write very good and it does not what termaniology you use you are getting the story told in your own words keep up the good work and I am lokking forward to the next parts