adeducator
Member Since October 25, 2009
Becky
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storyteller00069
5671 days ago
adeducator
5671 days ago
storyteller00069
5671 days ago
adeducator
5671 days ago
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I have a suggestion for a continuation of this story. Have both of Becky's parents join in in a foursome with Becky being the center of attention.
Adventures in Taboo 6
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johnscript
johnscript
Chapters five and six are identical. So when you go to Chapter seven, there seems to be a space there that leaves something to be explained, like where did the baby come from and a whole lot more. You need to go back and rewrite Chapter six to explain all the missing information. Otherwise, you have a great story here that has me horney thoughout the entire series. Can't get enough of this.
Co-Winner Forum Annonymous Story Contest Oct. 2007
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SSPAdmins
SSPAdmins
this story was kind of confusing with your jumping back and forth from one person to another.
Camping Cousin Part.2
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SSPAdmins
SSPAdmins
I want to hear more of this story. Would love to read about how you take Tina's virginity and then maybe the 16 year old's as well. Also maybe add the two sisters having a wild lesbian fling.
My Girls Chapter 22
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unknown1000u2
unknown1000u2
I am a retired teacher and have read a lot of stories. As much as I loved this story, you need to take out the sex parts and make this into a legitimate story and submit it to a publisher. This story had me laughing, in tears, and over all on the edge of my seat throughout the whole story. I usually rush though a story on these sites to the sex parts an concentrate on those parts, and I usually don't read long stories that have so many chapters. But this one caught my attention from Chapter one and held my interest all the way through, even though Chapter 9-11 were missing. Think about cleaning this up and having it published. I would buy this book.
Grandpa's Lessons Part 4
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MissSexKitten27
MissSexKitten27
I think that you need to study up on your biology. ONLY men have prostates.