Wyren
Member Since October 19, 2009
Wife Learns A Lesson
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RandyOne
5383 days ago
Wyren
5855 days ago
RandyOne
5383 days ago
Wyren
5855 days ago
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This was one of the more realistically inventive stories I have read in a long time!! I really enjoyed the plot and writing style! The mental images where good too!! Keep up the great stories!
my erotic lesson
by
rianiTF
rianiTF
I agree with the grammer and the paragraphs, it makes a story easier to read and less distracting if we don't have to translate misspelled or misused words, also watch when you space, some of your words were run together. Overall it was a good storie, ke
Stolen Innocence _Part 7 (conclusion)
by
johnny3434
johnny3434
This was a wonderfully constructed storie. Very complex thrill!!! I couldn't wait for what came next. I absolutely loved the end of this storie filled with action and revenge!!! You are by far the best writer I have seen on this site so far!!! Great
A Night To Renember
by
Striknyne
Striknyne
Good story... like already said check spelling... and read your story once out loud... you mixed some words up... example bad instead of bag