BubbleGum
Member Since October 19, 2009
The Visit
by
ChomZ
5383 days ago
BubbleGum
5855 days ago
ChomZ
5383 days ago
BubbleGum
5855 days ago
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Best written story I've seen here. Bravo. I'd love to read more of your work, your writing style is remarkable.
The Visit
by
ChomZ
ChomZ
I'd be very grateful if you could read mine, it's not as a good as yours, but oh well. It's the one beneath yours. lol. The Moon's Sun.
When I was raped
by
bree07
bree07
The story is fine. But you can't expect a reader to read one continuous paragraph without getting tired. Chop it up.