Akuma
Member Since October 19, 2009
The Way We Are
by
cherokee
5383 days ago
Akuma
5855 days ago
cherokee
5383 days ago
Akuma
5855 days ago
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10
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Not bad. Good job.
Daddy Yes! Wait...You're Not My Daddy!
by
DAELAANL
DAELAANL
This is exactly like another story in Animals. you've just switched out the dog for Uncle Jay. Bullshit. Actually do some work moron.
Texas
by
dexterndidi
dexterndidi
Boring. Utterly boring. Not worth the ink (Metaphorically) it took to write it. If you do one thing I beg of you, put a little effrt into your next story.
Me and Mah Sisters
by
icekold666
icekold666
I know this is your first so I'll go easy. Yes, it's tru she has time to improve, but keep in mind that some people have it and some don't. Next time run it through a grammar and spelling check, not so hard to do, hm? It will make it much easier to read
It Started With A Lick...Part 1
by
DAELAANL
DAELAANL
I don't know who wrote what first, but somebody has just copied this story and chaned it barely enough to fit into another category. What the hell people.